What Pegman Saw is a weekly 150 word fiction prompt using a location from Google Maps: here is the home page and this week’s Moscow Prompt is here.
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For my fictional piece – I am visiting my Polish uncle in Moscow. Words: 150
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Sitting at the stoplight, the car lightly putters.
Revving the engine, the clutch sits loosely in my hand.
Releasing a contented smile, I notice the delicate curves in the Moscow building to my right.
That’s a lot of red….
And this is a long light.
Waiting is easy. I’m taking an afternoon drive in my uncle’s ‘93 Porsche 968.
He lets me drive it whenever I’m in town.
It’s not worth much, but I like it better than his new red one.
Putters a bit, but 17-inch wheels are smooth on cobblestone and they take curves with finesse.
Cranking down the window, I look closer at 5 Red Square.
Hey, is this where Russian hackers were caught?
Let me see if I still have that text about it….
“Two college guys – with way too much time on their hands – were caught red-handed.”
Sure is a long red light….
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Just for fun: I made this text image (because I was working on Friday Fictioneers text message theme at the time…)
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Thanks to Debra Books (here) for introducing me to What Pegman Saw.
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Ha! Great storytelling in the pictures too.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Hey, did you want to add your story to the linkup, so the other Pegman contributors can read it? http://www.inlinkz.com/new/view.php?id=690670
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THANKS! just added it and now I am checking out a few other submissions.
really appreciate the link 🙂
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Nice!
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So cleaver. Quite a story teller too.
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Pink interior of a car! Cool.
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Hi YC – well it is actually ‘red” but I know the color looks off.
Here is a better shot of the actual red car…
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Dear Prior,
I love the addition of the text message. I just hope he only texts at the red light and not while he’s driving. Hard enough to do in an automatic.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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agreed- and yes – NEVER texts and drives… lol
🙂
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