Photo Credit to Rebel Guy/Girl
Here is the darker version of the image with the poem.
Here is the poem without the image:
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Sincerely
I opened to you
offered love
a bit of myself
If this love
is constantly devalued
taken for granted
mocked at times
I will still love you
but I WILL recoil
naturally
close off
wise retreat
The dust can settle
as the door closes
go where we are celebrated
not merely tolerated
Amidst any dignified retreat
love for you will abound
always
when you are ready
to receive and appreciate
I will be here
with light, love, and warmth
***
Thanks for reading.
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Hope 2018 is a very happy year, Yvette. All the best to you. I appreciate your visits likes and comments.
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happy new year to you too, Ruth
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Very lovely poem. Few words, remind me of a song “Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow”. I know the poem isn’t about the meaning of the song but few words just triggered my neural network to link to this.
I actually like both versions of the pictures. The original version gives gentler or softer kind of feeling. The modified version guides you directly to the message and the main flower of the picture. It is lovely but stronger in presenting you to the message.
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well thanks for the feedback – especially on the photo darkening cos I was unsure and did go back and forth.
but you nailed it – it was that open flower that was the subject
and so dear YC – we end the year with another song share – thanks for that.
I actually love Carol King version of “Will you still love me” and the live performance she did with Willie Nelson’s Outlaws and Angels (here) is very dear to me.
and so when you mentioned the song – I looked it up and had no idea The Shirelles rocked this jam- (love learning about music)
oh and lastly – yes, this poem was not really addressing romantic relations – maybe general family ties where blood lines connect and one side is taking the other for granted and the other side can only reach out for so long….
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Thank you for clarifying the poem. I am not good at reading any poem and just few words that remind me of the song. I like Carol King’s version too but lately I also do like few other covered ones.
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I had no idea this song was so popular – 🙂
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What a wonderful poem, dear woman of MANY talents! Here’s to a fabulous 2018! 😀 ❤
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haha – you made me smile – and nice to have that fan in you even though I know some people might cringe at my poetry –
the simple rhyming at times
or the pronoun use
lack of this or that
ha-
and so a few years ago I had to really just “own” what I like to write and your beautiful comment was like fuel – thanks my friend
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It’s good you just write what pleases you! I just read what pleases me! Keep up the good writing! 😀 ❤
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let’s keep doing what we do amiga
(((and stay warm)))
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Lovely poem Y
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I love that part, “go where we are celebrated, not merely tolerated”. I think that speaks volumes… especially this time of year.
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Hi ana – thanks for the feedback – and I actually thought about writing that exact phrase (which has been around for a while – eh?) but I also wanted to show love underpinning such an exit – there were a few family members I was thinking of in an indirect way when writing this – – and then also had a friend get dissed and so this was on my mind when the photo’s from RG came up – the lighter one opened –
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I know what you mean about that phrase floating around for a while. I was actually stuck in traffic for about an hour when i read your post, exactly because I want to spend New Year’s with people who appreciate, not just tolerate me. 🙂 it resonated and i liked the hint of optimism.
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Oh Ana – this is a theme I knew we already shared; we share so many societal and familial views.
and I am glad to have been with you in the traffic jam – it is so fun how blogging layers into our everyday lives – so enriching –
(and hope the drive is flowing well now or is over)
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I got there safely 😉 I only left the comment after the drive was over.
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got it….
and glad you arrived safely
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Thanks, Y 😉
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Celebrated, not merely tolerated…perfectly expressed. Wishing you more celebration in 2018, Y. Happy New Year.
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Hi Van…
happy new year to you as well…
and I forgot to add
“don’t let the door hit you on the way out”
maybe….
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Sadly, I understand.
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I love your poem. Go where you are celebrated! Perfect! Words to live by.
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Hi RG – thanks- and it is not my quote – not sure where I heard it – xxoo
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Love it. Let’s celebrate together 😉
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yes, exactly 🙂
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Very cool. I love the darkened background . It makes your poetry pop. That canon camera was a steal at 80 dollars . Speaking of celebrate Happy New Year.
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Quite nice. Who said Bloom where you’re planted? Love that. I think your Go where you are celebrated is right up there with Bloom where you’re planted. ❤
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yes – I think they are very compatible phrases – let’s order t-shirts – ha
and I am not sure who originally said bloom where you are planted – but think the first time I heard it was with Mary Englebert’s art….
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Ditto! How sweet! 😀
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