Gaudioso (fiction word count: 100)
This little studio set up
will not be taken down
It has been here for a decade and some days
‘twas my place of refuge
during an unemployment phase
small closet converted
led to transforming plays
$400 per square foot
for priceless melody
not even a place to set my tea
just music
and me.
I smile as I walk on by
glancing
at dusty pages
unplugged cords
Remembering….
that long, adagio season
DID come to an end
leading to much joy –
a return to normal tempo after a deviation is what
sometimes grounds a human
washes out demandingness
gaudioso….
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Author Notes
I wanted to use a few musical terms to go with Rochelle’s musical image this week and the terms i decided to use were:
Adagio, which is a music term that means “played slowly.”
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Music always helps through hard times.
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or can – for me it would be writing and making art – but in this fiction piece I imagined a dude being out of work and then this was his refuge…
thanks for the comment
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Very nicely done, Yvette.
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many thanks, Tish
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Music can soothe the soul.
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soothe and nourish… thanks for the comment
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Excellent! Music to my ears! 😉
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🙂
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(EN) A room full of different sounds and memories.Love it!
(IT) Una stanza piena di suoni diversi e ricordi.Mi piace molto!
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sounds and memories sums it up well – and side note
I thought about coming to you for some Italian music words – but I found what I needed –
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(EN) Yes.Gaudioso(joyful) is more than enough I think.
(IT)Si.Gaudioso è piú che sufficiente penso.
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🙂
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Nicely done!
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merci
🙂
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Just music and me… so beautifully expressed, Y! 🙂
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thanks amy….
I almost put those words in the title – and think I will go and do that now
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Lovely to have such a safe soothing refuge.
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could be a place for a writer to go if they have a block
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The strict daily job schedule may at times repress our creative genes. At least you have this little corner – I have only one guitar in a closet:) After having taken it out last year, I can’t believe how much I lost in 4 decades, and it does not come back easily – there’s much beyond the initial calluses
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well thanks for the feedback – and this short fiction was “not” auto-biographical at all – this typeof music room would not be “my” reprieve – even though I took guitar and bass lessons a few times over the decades – I find other forms of art fit me better – –
and how fun that you took out your guitar and have the callusses – I wonder how much will come back once you get immersed again?
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Love the last part: grounds a human, washing out demandingness. Want is the source of pain. Some fine lines in this!
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Thanks very much – and you are so right about “wants” – and I guess we could add to that “expectations”
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Cool studio 👌 and very nice poem as well.. sending love and best wishes… happy weekend 😘
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thanks and happy weekend to you too
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This was a refreshing take, Yvette. I really enjoyed it.
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thanks so much, Dale
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For some reason, your story sounds like a poem. I really like it!
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well muchas gracias YC
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Lovely. Healing music.
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good adjective
🙂
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I could relate a lot to this. Nicely done!
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That’s an expensive refuge, but it seems to have given him some good memories. Well worth it.
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yes – and quite often when people are unemployed they have time but not always the funds to travel or do what they want – so this set up was a healing reprieve and a reminder to be grateful if (when) the days of working feel like a grind
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I find myself singing along to this delightfully melodic piece
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well right on – and when you are done – tea is ready to be served in the other room, dear dir
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Music instantly uplifts me when I’m down. Love it!
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thanks Fatima – uplifts me too – have a nice day
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Well that’s just charming. I like where your inspiration came from, too.
I read that $400 a square foot part about three times. My only solitary residence was an apartment of 400 square feet for $409 a month. A total inversion of cost. Also, that place was more of an allegro passage to forte into THIS life! 🙂
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ahhh – that last sentence is a cool wordshmithy arrangement and had me read it again – “more of an allegro passage to forte into THIS life…”
and that apartment was pricey – whoa.
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LOL, it kinda was, but it was the cheapest one on my side of town and it had built in bookshelves (I had very little furniture) and a galley kitchen and a real linen closet, and step down balcony to a pond with ducks — it was a very happy stay, March to July 🙂 Then we (we became a we) got a bigger apartment in the same complex. Ah, good times. That’s when no one knew bread was bad for the ducks, Y. LOL
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So glad she has a refuge, and joy through playing music.
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Dear Yvette,
I loved your use of musical terms to pulse this lyrical story forward. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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If we could just have all have such a musical refuge…
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Just music and me…I like that.
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Clever mix of musical terms in the prose – well done
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Such elegrant prose.
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many thanks
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“Not even a place to set my tea, just music and me.” What a lovely take on the prompt. Totally believable.
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thanks so much – although I think we could move some of those sheets over and sent down a mug if needed – so come on back for some tea the next you hear the music play
🙂
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