Hello Readers.
It is time for a Friday Fictioneers post.
This week Rochelle has selected an image from J Hardy Carroll. The picture first reminded me of misc. hand-carved items family members used to have: kitchen trivets, five-hook shelves, etc. Then, the vertical blinds stood out. They might be good quality, but they reminded me of the cheap, plastic vertical blinds you find in low-end apartments. My story unfolded from there.
The photo:
The Fiction:
Genre: realistic fiction
word count: 100
Title: Wellness NOT Stuff
–Is it better to never taste luxury rather than have had it and lost it?
Losing prestige, power, possessions – having the rug pulled out – to catch your balance and then anchor with what “really” matters. To lose material items, wane in popularity – s i g h. Are these cyclic states to be held with a loose hand because health and mental wellness are King?
Standing tall, I adjusted the cheap blinds in my inexpensive, single-story condo; smiled to see the heirloom hand-carved miniature clock-building, which added beauty to the room.
Reminded me to enjoy beautiful things, but to hold possessions loosely.
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And note from J.H.C about the photo: This photo was taken at the Bily Clock Museum in Spillville, Iowa. The museum building was the residence of Antonín Dvořák during the summer of 1893 where he composed his String Quartet in F (also known as the “American Quartet”) and his String Quintet in E-Flat.
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“Hold possessions loosely”. I liked that. I hope I achieve that.
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I hope I do too
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peace
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A lesson for us all
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so agree
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Dear Yvette,
Evocative storytelling. As I sit here in the Midwest where the sun is shining my brother and his wife have evacuated their home in North Carolina, not knowing what they will come back to. He more or less said something similar to your last line this morning. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh! I hope they stay safe!
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well your brother has a wise outlook and I wish them all the best – and as of right now – looks like they will take the brunt of this hurricane. ugh
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Love the meaning behind this.
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Thakns Louise, I think many folks can relate in different ways
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Great story, great message. It certainly is a wonderful clock. Your last line is absolutely perfect.
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thanks a lot
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Sounds like something valuable was lost along the way.
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yes, perhaps a few big setbacks
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Wise words, well said.
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thx
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Love that sentiment! 🙂
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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thanks
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I like this. The only time possessions become a problem (IMHO) is when they start to own us and not the other way around!
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I agree, Linda.
And sadly people sometimes keep trying to meet needs with stuff (or status) –
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Nice transition from a philosophical debate question to a practical application of the theory.
The compromise: to live within her means, and yet keep something of what she loved and valued in her former life.
Many people went through this in the Recession and after storms like Florence seems likely to be. She sounds very strong and resolute, and I suspect she wont be down for long.
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Hi – I loved your comment but was actually thinking this was a “he” – ha
and you are right – a lot of folks went through this right after 2008 – and then with the storms you mentioned – and I hope people in NC are okay right now
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I love your contrasting beautiful things that make one happy against prideful things. Well done.
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thanks and I like that way you worded that
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Such an evocative image, Yvette. Yes, possessions are so overrated. Stuff is nice to have, but good health and the love of family and friends are absolutely priceless. xx
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thanks S, and I have followed your blog for years now and I think you practice what you preach here. Like how you value that really old knife you inherited – and how the reno job had you waiting –
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Ha………fancy your remembering Auntie Doris’s knife. It’s travelled with us from England to South Africa and us now residing in my kitchen drawer in Florida. It’s not the most beautiful knife in my kitchen, but it is the most treasured and often gets used. 😃 xx
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funny the things we remember with our blog friends – and I do think of your knife sometimes when I use this old one we have – maybe sometime I will share a photo of ours…
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😅👍
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Practicing that for more than a year now, or at least trying to. Not easy at all 🙂
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thanks for the genuine comment – my heart went out to you when I read it and maybe it will encourage someone else – to see how you are making it – and sending good thoughts your way, sir
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Much obliged for the kind words.
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A good way to be!
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that is interesting comment, draliman and some folks would agree with that whole-heartedly….
and I just learned of a country artist Alan Jackson – (not a big fan of country – but Jackson sings some nice songs and this song “The Older I get” had these words:
“The older I get
The more I think
You only get a minute, better live while you’re in it
‘Cause it’s gone in a blink
And the older I get
The truer it is
It’s the people you love, not the money and stuff
That makes you rich”
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here is the song (just FYI)
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A good one. Long ago I learned we only ever have anything on loan to pass on to the next. A hard, but necessary, lesson
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ahhhh – I like that idea of a “loan”
and we try to keep things with an open fist (as opposed to a tight, clenched hand that grips and squeezes) – just so things don’t own us
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Yes
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Too bad, good time had passed him by.
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or maybe a few times they did – (I was trying to say that with the word “cyclic”)
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A great life lesson at the heart of your story.
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thanks a lot
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The first and last lines say it all. A thought-provoking piece indeed.
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thanks Keith
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A thoughtful piece, with a profound message. Well done in your delivery.
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thanks “K to the two” because I was going for profound
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Well done, Y, I meant to say. But too keen on my commenting… actually I was interrupted by a dog with kennel cough needing more love.
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hope the pup is 100% soon
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(woof)
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ti guess we value something more when we realize it has an expiration date.
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that’s deep, and a nice comment to chew on – thx
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Well said, Yvette. Very wise words.
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thanks so much DT
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You’re welcome!
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appreciate the comment DT
🙂
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😃😃
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Virtuous convictions are best..
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well said
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Yes, indeed. We realize the beauty of things that are more important than possessions.
A lesson in your story we all need to realize. I like where you took the photo prompt.
Great writing …
Isadora 😎
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muchas gracias, amiga
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and really enjoyed comment chatting on your selection this week –
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Lovely last line, and a lot to think about.
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thanks so much
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Great message.
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thanks
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There is much more to be said here about how your narrator got to their present state – a tantalising start.
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yes – more to the story for him, but maybe it is not needed as for many people stuff comes and goes (cyclic) thanks for reading
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I read Sidney Poitier’s book “The Measure of a Man” and he said one could not go back…he would visit his family in the Bahamas but would stay in a hotel. He was now used to luxury and did not want to return to that life, even momentarily. I think there is something to what he says. And then I think, we have become so much about “stuff” that we have forgotten what is most important. I think, for him, it meant that once you’ve attained a certain level, going back would be like a sort of failure. All about perspective…
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Oh! And wonderful piece, Yvette!!
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A thought provoking story full of wisdom and acceptance. Adapting to change and making the best of it–that’swhat survivors do.
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Oh I love the thought of keeping a few treasures…. maybe true joy lies in moderation…
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Like Rochelle, yet on the other side of the world, nature (Typhoon Mangkhut) reminds us what is truly important and it’s not our stuff. Nice comparison between enjoying beauty and possessions. Well written story! 🙂
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A good reminder for us all!
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Powerful message. Happiness does not come from what we have, but what we are. Nicely done
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Awesome post! Powerful ending!
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